He is unique, he has holes in his ears because when I was younger I liked to pierce his ears.
Pooh-Bear's tummy is incredibly soft, but all of the rest of his fur has worn off. His paws have cuts from me sucking on them (WHEN I WAS YOUNGER). All of the stuffing is coming out…….
BUT I STILL LOVE HIM!!!!!!
By Camryn
I like your parts about piercing his ears and sucking on his paws. It shows the reader lots about your own character, as well as giving a unique picture of your Pooh-Bear.
ReplyDeleteYou add magic voice to your writing, Camryn.
Mr M :)
well done camryn your pooh bear sounds like a great toy and the way you described you story i can tell that you will always love him
ReplyDeletemonique:)
that was cool.
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pooh-bear.
-Sydney
wonderfull story Camryn god words you have in your brilliant story well done Camryn. From Matt M
ReplyDeletei know from your descripition that you love him alot. great describing that furry tummy would be nice to sleep on
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