My favourite toy was a teddy bear called PK that's short for pyjama king. Me and PK had a lot of fun together, when I was little I would take him everywhere, no matter what.
One of our great adventures were when I went to the farmers market, because I was little I fed PK food to him thinking he was very real. PK was very fussy. He would not eat red meat. We went to the bread stand to buy bread. I tasted bread and I put PK down.
Then we went off to another stand about cheeses and I went to get PK out of the push chair and he wasn't there. I got really upset and I started to cry and cry I got very upset and I didn't know where I put him and then I remembered I left him at the bread stand. I raced as fast as a lion to the bread stand and it was like we were together again. It was the best day in my life and I will never misplace him again!!
By Caitlin N
I like how PK is fussy and doesn't eat red meat. I especially like how those little details you add, Caitlin. For example, the breads stand and the cheeses stand at the Farmers Market. It helps the reader picture the setting.
ReplyDeleteMr M :)
dear caitlin i easily visaulised this setting beacause you described it so well and i liked the simily as fast as a lion but i would of said as fast as cheater
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