Friday, August 12, 2011

Difference between Adults and Children


The differences between adults and children are exceedingly different.

Adults: I say adults are much smarter stronger and have more experience than children.

Children: my experience of being a child is much more fun than being a adult {not that I've been one} since we can be lazy for a very long time without being noticed and we are smaller so we can hide in more cramped places.

I've thought of a competition for the children and adults to compete in. See what you've got to do is make a dare devil but safe roller coaster for the other opponent to ride. I, the teenager will judge you out of 10 using these criteria:

  • Safety
  • Entertainment
  • Themability
  • Action
  • Creativity
So that is your criteria.

The theme is cartoon experiences like Star Wars trilogy, My Gym Partner is a Monkey, Grim and Mandy and many other cartoons.

These are the children's advantages:

  • They don't need to make their roller coaster
  • They only need to make the blue prints
  • They can get ideas from the adults creation
These are the adult's advantages:

  • They can make deliberate noises to the kids.
  • They too only need to make the blueprints
  • They don't need to make the roller coaster.
The creations will be made in the next few months.

A few months later: they have completed their roller coaster creations.
The children have constructed the Star Wars Space Fight. It takes you through a space fight between the rebels and the Empire. You take a journey when you get into your Starship and you pilot your ship through all the different levels.

The adults have constructed the Grim and Mandy space launch. It sends you to a great treacherous flight against the boggier boogie bombs. You must find a way to get past all the boogie bombs.

The children have scored 9+10+7+8+9=43

The Adults have scored 8+9+8+10+7=42

THE CHILDREN HAVE WON!!!!

By Stefan

7 comments:

  1. I love your creativity and how you express your ideas, Stefan. My favourite part is how you turned it into a competition with a specific set criteria and made the judge/narrator a teenager.
    It is entertaining to read!

    Mr M :)

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  2. love the discription, me love the thheme stefan.
    close game.
    to bad parents don't know much carttoon characters unless the've been spying on us.
    stefan

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  3. I think it was great because it had a lot of humor in it.

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  4. stefan my boy you should let adult win once. but besides that love the theme for childrens roller coaster creation.
    but where me ship??
    hmmmmmmhmhmhm

    yoda voice stefan writer

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  5. awesome challenge stefan. lots of humor too. good work.
    alien amber

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  6. wow that was really long. The vocabulary was good, like the word "exceedingly"

    -Sydney

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  7. wow this is problay my favourite writing on the blog so far i like the word "exceedingly" i love how you turned it into a competition yay kids rule

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