MY FIRST TOY
My first toy was a dog. He was really cute and cuddly.
His name is Rufus. He is the best dog in the world. He doesn't care if I think he is a horse because I always try and ride him like a horse.
He is great. The best things about him are his eyes and ears. His eyes are blue like the dark sea, and they are hard. His ears are nice and furry like my hair.
Matt W.
matt
ReplyDeletei liked how you described rufus eyes i did the same to my dog jet ( try ride them like a horse)
hey matt I love how you described Rufus's eyes (as blue as the dark sea)and I also liked how you described his ears (his is are as furry mine)
ReplyDeleteoverall I think your story is cool.