Friday, August 12, 2011

What Happened To My Gary???

My favourite toy when I was little was Gary the snail. Let me tell you more about it. Gary is from Spongebob Square pants, the show. Gary had a blue body with a pink shell. He had a purple swirl and polka dots. You can't forget his giant eyes. They're red. I played with him so much.

    Anyway, enough jibber jabber, let's get to it. One day, I was playing with my toy, Gary. He is or rather was battery powered, and followed me around. Suddenly, I got nervous. "Oh no! What if I get sucked in? What if he eats me?" I thought. So, I climbed on the chair in the lounge. I laughed. I don't know why. I thought I was actually scared. I guess not. Maybe it seemed like I was, when I really wasn't. Years passed. Now I wonder and say to myself: "Where is Gary now?"

    THE END……………………………….

By Sydney
Posted by Parkvale 18
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  1. Parkvale 18August 16, 2011 at 2:30 AM

    I like how you talk directly to the reader (using the pronoun 'you'), Sydney.
    I also like how you show the reader your feelings through your thoughts and actions.

    Mr M :)

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  2. AnonymousAugust 26, 2011 at 9:44 PM

    cool i like how you described him and it matched the picture. i also liked how you said enough jibber jabber
    lily

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